C sent me her drawing and a list of questions. Instead of circling new areas on the photo and addressing those, I will attempt to help her with her specific concerns. This is what I would have done if we were sitting together in class, before giving her new instructions.

Her list is in green below.

1. The dark line on the left side of his face is definitely too dark. Not sure why I left that, but I’m guessing I need to use my gum eraser and lighten that up. The white area that is above the eye looks much better on your example from last week, mine is too dark, but I’m not sure how to adjust that or if I need to. Your thoughts?

2. I erased the little swirl in the middle of his forehead because I realized it was not in the correct spot so I will add that back in this week.

3. I have some lines in the forelock that are a bit strange, from erasing, that I need to correct. Other than that, how do you think the forelock looks and what are your suggestions?

4. The mane. I attempted it and feel like it’s starting to look ok, but would it be possible to break the steps down a bit more on that for me? I feel like you gave me step 1 and step 4 but me being me,  I need steps 2 and  3 also.  Like here’s the squiggly lines (step 1), now here’s an example of the next step, and then the step after that to get to the clumps of dark and light (step 4). I hope that makes sense. 🙂

5. The very bottom of his chest on the left, that I have shaded in, looks a bit strange. The pencil strokes don’t look right. What would you suggest to correct that?

It was much harder this time, because I needed to show her by placing tissue over her drawing and drawing on top so she could see how to correct things. Instead, I had to rely on words.

 

It is pretty difficult to show steps this way because I have to draw step one, then draw it again and show step two on top and then draw steps one and two again with step three on top of that and then redraw one, two, and three before adding four.

Here are my notes in response. Time will tell whether or not this method of teaching is helpful to C.